SEA OF KNOWLEDGE SNAPSHOT

Prompt: Finish the scene of the Humbug meeting a fish from the School of Knowledge. Your scene should focus on a description of the new character and the setting, as well as dialogue to develop the character’s personality.

Make sure you have:

-Sensory Details (think 5 senses) that describe your character and the setting

-Vivid Verbs to show your character's actions

-Dialogue that shows your character's personality and is punctuated correctly.

-Consistent verb tense.

The Humbug was on his way to a party in his honor. He loudly proclaimed, “Nothing could possibly ruin this day.” He suddenly floated from his car and landed on the Island of Conclusions.

After several days, the Humbug decided to swim back through the Sea of Knowledge. He struggled to stay afloat, but then a school of fish from the Golden Sea of Knowledge decided to help him. The Humbug was surrounded by a school of fish that wished to share knowledge with him. He thought he already knew all that he needed to know.

Prompt: Finish the scene of the Humbug meeting a fish from the School of Knowledge. Your scene should focus on a description of the new character and the setting, as well as dialogue to develop the character’s personality.

The Humbug was on his way to a party in his honor. He loudly proclaimed, “Nothing could possibly ruin this day.” He suddenly floated from his car and landed on the Island of Conclusions.

After several days, the Humbug decided to swim back through the Sea of Knowledge. He struggled to stay afloat, but then a school of fish from the Golden Sea of Knowledge decided to help him. The Humbug was surrounded by a school of fish that wished to share knowledge with him. He thought he already knew all that he needed to know.