Bell 25-26 Native American Timed Writing
Question 1
You may use your chosen text - “Coyote Finishes His Work” or “Squant the Sea Woman” - and the notes you have on it while writing this essay in class.
You do not need an introduction, but you must begin with a one-sentence thesis that answers the selected prompt. Then, develop two to five paragraphs that analyze the passage in relation to your thesis. You do not need a conclusion, but a conclusion often helps make a final argument to support your thesis, so make every effort to write one.
In a carefully organized essay, analyze how the Native American text you chose to analyze - either “Coyote Finishes His Work” or “Squant the Sea Woman” - uses style (such as symbolism, imagery, figurative language, plot, etc.) to develop specific characteristics of Native American literature.
Source 1.1
Coyote Finishes His Work from the Nez Percé tradition, retold by Barry Lopez
From the very beginning, Coyote was traveling around all over the earth. He did many wonderful things when he went along. He killed the monsters and the evil spirits that preyed on the people. He made the Indians, and put them out in tribes all over the world because Old Man Above wanted the earth to be inhabited all over, not just in one or two places.
He gave all the people different names and taught them different languages. This is why Indians live all over the country now and speak in different ways.
He taught the people how to eat and how to hunt the buffalo and catch eagles. He taught them what roots to eat and how to make a good lodge and what to wear. He taught them how to dance. Sometimes he made mistakes, and even though he was wise and powerful, he did many foolish things. But that was his way.
Coyote liked to play tricks. He thought about himself all the time, and told everyone he was a great warrior, but he was not. Sometimes he would go too far with some trick and get someone killed. Other times, he would have a trick played on himself by someone else. He got killed this way so many times that Fox and the birds got tired of bringing him back to life. Another way he got in trouble was trying to do what someone else did. This is how he came to be called Imitator.
Coyote was ugly too. The girls did not like him. But he was smart. He could change himself around and trick the women. Coyote got the girls when he wanted.
One time, Coyote had done everything he could think of and was traveling from one place to another place, looking for other things that needed to be done. Old Man saw him going along and said to himself, “Coyote has now done almost everything he is capable of doing. His work is almost done. It is time to bring him back to the place where he started.”
So Great Spirit came down and traveled in the shape of an old man. He met Coyote. Coyote said, “I am Coyote. Who are you?”
Old Man said, “I am Chief of the earth. It was I who sent you to set the world right.”
“No,” Coyote said, “you never sent me. I don’t know you. If you are the Chief, take that lake over there and move it to the side of that mountain.”
“No. If you are Coyote, let me see you do it.”
Coyote did it.
“Now, move it back.”
Coyote tried, but he could not do it. He thought this was strange. He tried again, but he could not do it.
Chief moved the lake back.
Coyote said, “Now I know you are the Chief.”
Old Man said, “Your work is finished, Coyote. You have traveled far and done much good. Now you will go to where I have prepared a home for you.”
Then Coyote disappeared. Now no one knows where he is anymore.
Old Man got ready to leave, too. He said to the Indians, “I will send messages to the earth by the spirits of the people who reach me but whose time to die has not yet come. They will carry messages to you from time to time. When their spirits come back into their bodies, they will revive and tell you their experiences.
“Coyote and myself, we will not be seen again until Earthwoman is very old. Then we shall return to earth, for it will require a change by that time. Coyote will come along first, and when you see him you will know I am coming. When I come along, all the spirits of the dead will be with me. There will be no more Other Side Camp. All the people will live together. Earthmother will go back to her first shape and live as a mother among her children. Then things will be made right.”
Now they are waiting for Coyote.
Source 1.2
Squant, The Sea-woman
A Wampanoag tale
Every Indian knows the story of how Maushop fought the Bird-monster, challenged that man-eating eagle to come down from a tree and fight, how the eagle flew at Maushop’s eyes, tried to claw out the giant’s heart, how talons tore at living flesh and great beak ripped at veins and muscles of neck and shoulders; and how, finally Maushop permitted the monster to come so close that it seemed as if the Bird-demon were beating its black wings on his breast. At that moment a storm arose over the sea; the island shook with thunder of battle; lightning flashed; waters howled; and Maushop reached out his two hands, caught the eagle around the neck and wrung that neck as if it were a deer’s hide washed after the drying.
The Black Demon fell dead. His wings, falling over the white shore, covered the bones of children that he had stolen and devoured. Weary with battle, Maushop sat down in the Eagle’s Den. There was no tobacco on the island, so he filled his pipe with pokeweed, for he needed to smoke and rest awhile with the great Bird-monster at his feet. Wind raged over the sea; waves snarled and showed their teeth. Suddenly, among them, a Sea-woman arose and approached the Den. Her eyes were square, her head was covered with locks of seaweed, her fingers were webbed as the tern’s feet, and she sang a wild song, in which joined the Wolf-waves who followed her, howling as they came.
Maushop continued to smoke his pipe, though he watched that Sea-woman well. She came close enough to make sure that the Black Eagle was dead; then tore her hair and whimpered, and turned away with the tide. When the tide came in again, she drifted along with it, and this time she smiled. The storm went away; the wind blew from the south; the sun came out; and Maushop saw that her hair was green, glistening, her body wide and flat like a ribbon of kelp. He knew then, that she was Squant, the sea-giantess. So he waded into the ocean and reached for a hold on her braids. They slipped like green water through his fingers. Squant laughed, sang a song, and hid in an underseas cave not far from the cliffs at Gay Head. Maushop desired to follow her, and wrap her hair around him; but he, a man giant, needed to breathe the wind.
Every day Squant came with the incoming tide, smiled, and beckoned him to follow. Maushop sat in his Den and thought about it. Sometimes he swam in the sea with her, but when she went down to the undersea cave he did not dare to follow. Back in Poponesset on the Narrow Land he had a wife and sons who were waiting for his return; and the Indian mothers also waited to know the fate of their eagle-born children. Maushop’s wife was ugly, a terrible scold. There was no peace in their wigwam, so, occasionally, Maushop grew a little tired of her. It was pleasant to rest in the eagle’s Den, and watch the smoke from his pipe drift over the mainland. When Squant called to him and he did not come, she frowned. The wind veered to the northeast, the sea grew white, and Maushop knew that it would be no use to attempt to return to the Narrow Land. Squant could stir up such fearful weather that not even a giant might breast the waves, or fight the north wind that beat him steadily offshore.
Year by year Maushop rested. To have an excuse for his absence, he began to build a bridge from Gay Head to Cuttyhunk. He filled one of his moccasins with sand and waded out to empty it on the intended line. Along came a crab that was looking for something to do, and when he saw Maushop’s uncovered foot, he took a hold of it. Crabs have no use for giants. Giants have no use for crabs. Maushop reached out his arm and broke off a portion of Gay Head Cliff. The crab let go of Maushop’s foot in a hurry and scuttled out of the way. Maushop lifted that piece of cliff and heaved it after the crab. It fell directly on top of the offender and buried him deeply in the sea bottom. A part of the cliff stuck out of water, and is called No Man’s land.
Maushop gave building his bridge, and that spring determined to return to the Cape, to visit his wife, and tell the Indian people the story of the eagle’s Den. Then he remembered that it was the season of planting corn, which should be put into the ground when the leaf of the white oak is as big as a mouse’s ear. He knew that his wife would bother him about corn, and in the villages the men and women would stop their work to mourn for the eagle-born children. So he waited a little longer, till he chanced to think of his wife’s strawberry bread. Like other Indian women, she bruised strawberry in a mortar, mixed them with meal, and baked them into loaves. Maushop climbed from his den and started across the South Sea, to advise his children, discipline his wife, and eat strawberry bread. In the summer Squant never lost her temper as she did when the days were short. She sat in her cave and blew bubbles, and sang a song that made Maushop desire to cover himself with her green hair. He walked quickly away from her. Squant laughed, and sang another song that meant that he would return.
On the mainland, he came upon his wife in a wigwam with a Bad Indian from the North. The Indian was like an ant crawling over her. Maushop picked him off and threw him into Great Marshes. There the land lapped over him, and he lies to this day in the mound known as Scorton`s Neck. The giant spoke to his wife. He was very angry; for Indians, unlike white people, are loyal to one another and believe in keeping their wives. He ordered her to bake strawberry bread. She only covered her head with ashes and mourned for the Man from the North. Maushop lost his temper. He picked her up and tossed her across-channel to Succonesset. He picked up his five children and threw them into the sea. They were transformed into fishes and swam away to the south. Sometimes, when storms are heavy, they come close to shore again. Hidden in waves, they wail aloud and suck at the sand as though they were still giant-babies suckling at their mother’s breast.
Maushop sat down on a hill and bowed his head in his hands. He thought of the bed that he had made of eagle fathers and bear hide in the den at Gay Head. He went back to the Island before the sun was fallen, and sat on the edge of a rainbow cliff to smoke his pipe. The waters churned. Squant came up between the waves and shook her hair.
That night, as the tide went out, the Gentle Giant followed her to the underseas cave. The Sea-woman twined her green braids about him and so he fell asleep.
Maushop has never awakened from those long years of slumber. Squant sits in the Cave day and night, with the young giant’s body laid across her knees. Sometimes she sings to make his sleep happy, or blows bubbles and smiles. When winter comes and the days grow shorter, she is in terror that he will never waken. Then the waters over the underseas cave seethe and circle like fighting eagles. Into that whirlpool white men’s ships are sucked down as readily as Indian canoes. The Sea-woman takes them in the hope that Maushop will rouse himself when he feels in his hands these reminders of life on the Long Land.
Mariners, it is well to know where that whirlpool lies!
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