BOTH sides - Conventions and Tone FEEDBACK

AVOID ALL OF THE FOLLOWING:

Dead Words - thing, things, some, lots, stuff, very, really, cool, kinda, bad, good, fun, got, get, gonna

1st and 2nd Person Pronouns - I, me, my, we, us, our, ours, you, your, yours, myself, ourselves, yourself, yourselves

Slang

Contractions

Narrative phrases - "First I will talk about . . .", "That's all the reasons . . .", "This paragraph is about . . .", "I think that . . ." or anything else like these.

CONVENTIONS: mistakes in spelling, punctuation, capitalization, grammar, sentence fragments, sentence run-ons

Paste youAVOID ALL OF THE FOLLOWING:

Dead Words - thing, things, some, lots, stuff, very, really, cool, kinda, bad, good, fun, got, get, gonna

1st and 2nd Person Pronouns - I, me, my, we, us, our, ours, you, your, yours, myself, ourselves, yourself, yourselves

Slang

Contractions

Narrative phrases - "First I will talk about . . .", "That's all the reasons . . .", "This paragraph is about . . .", "I think that . . ." or anything else like these.

CONVENTIONS: mistakes in spelling, punctuation, capitalization, grammar, sentence fragments, sentence run-onsr ENTIRE essay (including works cited page) in the box.