FOR - 2nd body paragraph for FEEDBACK

Transition: Word, phrase, or sentence that connects this paragraph to the previous paragraph so they flow                  smoothly. (Ex: Another reason why . . .)

Subclaim/Topic Sentence: Clearly states first reason being argued

Evidence: Several pieces of research and evidence that supports the subclaim. Evidence should be paraphrased        (in your own words) and NOT directly quoted. Each sentence must express a new, relevant piece of information.

In-text Citations: Every piece of data shows the source it came from either through the wording of the sentence         or in parenthesis before the period at the end of the sentence.

Explanation: Student connects research with ideas and explanations of their own, showing how the research              proves the claim.

Concluding sentence: “Wraps up” the paragraph and points out how this paragraph proves your overall claim.         Evidence doesn’t count as a concluding sentence.

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