Argumentative Essay: The Use of an Artist's Music in Advertising

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Write an argumentative essay for your school's newspaper, either supporting or opposing the use of an artist's music in advertising. In your essay, use information from the passage set provided. Manage your time effectively by reading the passages, planning your response, writing your essay, and revising and editing it. Ensure that your essay includes a clear claim, addresses counterclaims, utilizes evidence from multiple sources, and avoids over-reliance on a single source. Your response should be in the form of a well-structured multi-paragraph essay.
Source 1:
The music industry is in the midst of a large upheaval. In decades past, artists
made money through physical sales of records, CDs, and cassettes. However,
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those forms of media are quickly fading away. And while downloading songs from
services such as Amazon or iTunes has become the most common way for people
to purchase music in recent years, the whole idea of buying music to own may be
falling by the wayside. To take its place are Internet services that stream music
directly to listeners on their smartphones, tablets, or computers. These apps are
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typically available either as ad-supported free versions or ad-free monthly
subscription services. And while this is great for fans, who now have access to
millions of songs at the flick of a touchscreen, it has shattered the traditional
model of how an artist manages his or her career.
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With music lovers increasingly moving away from making one-time purchases
towards an all-you-can-listen-to service, what is a hardworking artist to do? The
main problem facing many musicians is that payments-per-stream of a song are
much lower than what an artist would receive from a download. According to
data journalist David McCandless, a signed solo artist would need about 5,478
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iTunes downloads of a song per month versus 4,200,000 YouTube streams per
month just to make the U.S. minimum wage. Some big-name artists have called
attention to the issue. In November of 2014, award-winning musician Taylor
Swift pulled her entire music catalog from Spotify, a popular streaming app,
claiming that their business model suggests that music does not hold much
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worth.
Others have embraced the idea of streaming music, claiming that it offers smaller
artists a chance for their music to get heard by a wider audience. Zoë Keating, a
cellist who describes herself as established but non-mainstream, suggests that
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these services should be viewed as a way for musicians to get their music out
there and not as an income source. Brian Message, manager of the band
Radiohead, has come out in support of streaming services. He sees them as a way
for musicians and fans to interact.
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Regardless of what artists may think about this shift in the music industry, there’s
no arguing that they need to adapt in order to make money. While touring and
selling merchandise have always been tried-and-true revenue streams, one major
shift in recent years has been the growth in partnership between artists and
businesses. Corporate sponsorship can be a risky option for musicians. A band
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can make hundreds of thousands of dollars by agreeing to promote a product or
license its music for use in advertisements, but there are many ways that this can
backfire. Alex Scally, instrumentalist for the indie-pop duo Beach House, notes
that when bands take on corporate sponsors they may lose the image they have
worked to create. However, Scally does assert that the rules could be different for
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smaller bands just starting out.
It’s clear that for artists big or small, trying to maintain credibility while
struggling to sustain a career is certainly tricky. Artists must develop an image
that appeals to their fans in order to remain unique and authentic, or they risk
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striking the wrong chord, which could leave them struggling to sustain careers in
this new business landscape.
Source 1.1: The Changing Landscape of the Music Business by Jacob Carter
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With so much hype about how difficult it is to make it in the music business these days,
it’s understandable why artists would turn to large corporations to help bring them a
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bigger audience and, most importantly, a bigger paycheck. But is this really a good idea
in the long run?
Artists considering an endorsement deal need to remember that their sponsors are out
to benefit as well. As soon as a musician signs on the dotted line of a corporate
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partnership, he or she has a responsibility to represent the company and help it sell its
products. This can be tremendously stressful for artists who are just starting to build
their careers, as they need to spend energy creating good music and a unique image that
appeals to fans. Endorsement deals can keep a musician afloat, but can also take the
focus away from what really matters—the music.
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Sometimes popular, well-established artists who seemingly have little to gain from these
deals end up having the most to lose. Take U2 for example—one of the world’s most
popular rock bands who, after landing a deal with Apple that had their 2014 album
*Songs of Innocence* installed into 500 million iTunes subscribers’ libraries for free,
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faced a storm of negative feedback from fans and critics alike. People resented the idea
that an album they didn’t ask for was forced on them, likening the album to “musical
spam,” and the reputations of both U2 and Apple were damaged. Over-exposure is a
huge risk for popular bands who license out their music as well; people often tire of
hearing the same music every time they turn on the radio, watch television, or go to the
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movies. When the electronic artist Moby released his critically acclaimed album *Play*
in 1999, he licensed out each one of the album’s 18 tracks. Fans simply lost interest
because they heard his music everywhere they went, and the artist himself has suffered
the stigma of going a bit too far in licensing his songs.
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Many songs are written with specific intentions and meanings; they express an artist’s
values and beliefs about the world. In many situations, a record label owns the rights to
an artist’s music, and if they license a song to a company or other party the artist has no
control over how the song can be used. Neil Young, an artist known for his politically
charged lyrics, expressed disappointment when his music was used by a U.S.
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presidential candidate without his permission, saying that he would not have allowed
the candidate to use the song had he been asked. If a band has already created an image
of itself as being somewhat rebellious or part of the counter-culture, selling its music to
a corporation can leave fans feeling betrayed. Robert Schneider, member of the band
Apples in Stereo and a Beach Boys fan, tells of the days he heard the song “Good
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Vibrations” in a soft drink ad, noting that it took him a while to stop associating the song
with the commercial.
The music business is just that—a business. It exists to make money, and artists need to
make money in order to continue making music. But when outside interests enter the
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mix, they can replace the passion in an artist’s music and turn the art into just another
tool for corporations.
Source 1.2: Selling Out Not Worth the Risk by Darrius Johnson
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Years ago, when people still bought full albums and artists were paid a decent
percentage of the sales, the idea of “selling out” by accepting corporate sponsorships or
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licensing out songs was seen as a sure-fire way to lose credibility and respect in the eyes
of fans. “How could they?!” fans would cry, at the shock of hearing their once-loved
underground indie band in a commercial for a family-sized sedan. But these days,
thanks to the rise of online music streaming and cheap digital downloads, what once
was taboo has now become the norm. It is now accepted, and even necessary, for bands
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to put their music in commercials or promote products for sponsors in order to sustain a
career in the music business.
Some argue that any loss in album sales can be offset by touring and selling
merchandise. But with rising costs and other factors, even this is not enough. Booking
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agents and tour managers must be paid, gas and food must be bought, t-shirts and
posters must be manufactured—all of these costs add up. A post on social media by
Shane Blay, a member of the metal band Oh, Sleeper, details the bite these costs can
take out of a band’s touring revenue. Out of the $600 of gross income per night that a
mid-level touring band such as his typically makes, they will be left with only $78.75 of
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net income after deductions for all their other costs. This doesn’t even include hotel
costs, which are usually $50–$60 per night. By the end of the tour, his band may even
end up losing more money than it makes.
A corporation paying for these costs can make the difference between artists growing
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their careers, or completely giving up on the music business altogether. The Shins, a
relatively unknown indie-rock band, grew massively in popularity after getting their
single “New Slang” in a McDonald’s commercial, as well as a few other movies and TV
shows. And while the sums of these deals aren’t disclosed, a band can earn anywhere
from $10,000 to $150,000—plenty of money for equipment, touring, and living
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expenses.
Some bands have thoroughly embraced branding and see it more as an opportunity
rather than a necessity. For example, the massively successful pop group, the Black Eyed
Peas, focuses on exposure before paycheck. For years, they’ve allowed corporations to
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use their music in advertisements for cars, electronics, and jeans, among many other goods. In 2001, the trio did a 30-second commercial for Dr. Pepper soda. They made
those 30 seconds a priority, even as they were preparing material for their next album.
Then, in 2003, when Apple unveiled its iTunes store, the Black Eyed Peas’ song “Hey
Mama” was the first of the now-famous ad campaigns for the store. For the Peas, this
business model has more than paid off. Now a household name, the group discovered
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that the more invested they became in marketing and branding, the more successful
they became with fans.
For artists serious about their careers, turning down any form of corporate sponsorship
or licensing agreements could be a mistake. At times, it’s not only necessary, but a smart
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way to make it in today’s music business.
Source 1.3: The New Necessity in the Music Business by Stacia Coates

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