ACT Success - English Practice #2

In the passages that follow, certain words and phrases appear in brackets { }. In the questions, you will find alternatives for the bracketed part. In most cases, you are to choose the option that best expresses the idea, makes the statement appropriate for standard written English, or is worded most consistently with the style and tone of the passage as a whole. If you think the original version is best, choose “NO CHANGE.” You will also find questions about a section of the passage, or about the passage as a whole. These questions do not refer to a bracketed portion of the passage. For each question, choose the alternative you consider best. Read each passage through once before you begin to answer the questions that accompany it. For many of the questions, you must read several sentences beyond the question to determine the answer.

[1] The journey began at dawn on the Rock of Gibraltar, the early light casting a warm glow over the Mediterranean. I set out with {little then} a backpack and a hammock, my only companions on this long trek across the Iberian Peninsula. The road stretched northward through Andalusia, a region steeped in history and natural beauty. My first major destination was the Sierra de Grazalema, known for its dramatic limestone peaks and dense forests. [2] Walking through the sleepy villages of the Cadiz province, I found a rhythm to the journey. Each village welcomed me with its own flavor—plazas shaded by ancient olive trees, narrow cobbled streets, and the occasional whiff of churros frying in a nearby kitchen. Locals, curious about my travels, often invited me to share a meal or {stay for} the night. One evening, in a small hamlet near Ronda, I was hosted by a family who insisted I try their homemade gazpacho and freshly baked bread. The warmth and hospitality of the people, as much as the stunning landscapes, {keeps} my spirits high during those long, solitary days of walking. [3] The climb into the Sierra de Grazalema was steep, but the views from the summit were worth every step. From the top, the rolling hills of Andalusia stretched out like a patchwork quilt, dotted with whitewashed villages and the occasional flash of a river winding its way through the valleys. As I descended into the lush forests below, the air cooled, carrying the scent of pine and wildflowers. I set up my hammock between two sturdy trees, listening to the rustle of leaves in the evening breeze and the distant call of an owl. It was a moment of pure peace, a reminder of {why I had set out on this journey at first place.}


Entry 2: "Crossing the Meseta" [4] After the rugged beauty of the Sierra de Grazalema, the vast, flat plains of the Meseta were a stark contrast. This high plateau, stretching across central Spain, is often seen as the country’s heartland, a land of endless wheat fields and small, isolated towns. Days here were long and hot, the sun beating down relentlessly on the cracked earth. The road stretched ahead in a straight, {unbroken lines,} the horizon a shimmering blur in the distance. [5] Walking through this landscape, I felt a profound sense of solitude. The only sounds were the crunch of my boots on the gravel path and the occasional buzz of cicadas in the dry grass. Yet, in this emptiness, I discovered a kind of clarity. With nothing but the open road before me, my mind wandered freely, {untangling thoughts and memories which} had long been buried beneath the busyness of everyday life. [6] One afternoon, as I approached a small village, I noticed a group of elderly men gathered under a shady tree, their eyes following me with a mix of curiosity and amusement. They invited me to join them, and I spent the next hour listening to their stories—tales of the Spanish Civil War, of family members who had emigrated to distant lands, and of the simple joys and hardships of life on the Meseta. It struck me how, in this seemingly desolate place, community and connection thrived. [7] The days on the Meseta tested my endurance, but they also brought unexpected moments of beauty—a field of sunflowers swaying in the wind, the silhouette of a solitary farmhouse against the setting sun, the night sky ablaze with stars. As I lay in my hammock at the end of each day, the vastness of the landscape seemed to echo the vastness of the journey itself, both the physical miles and the inner terrain I was navigating.

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Question 1a

Multiple choice

I set out with {little then} a backpack and a hammock, my only companions on this long trek across the Iberian Peninsula. Which choice best corrects the selection in brackets?

  • NO CHANGE

  • little than

  • fewer then

  • little more than

Question 1b

Multiple choice

Locals, curious about my travels, often invited me to share a meal or {stay for} the night. Which of the following alternatives to the selection in brackets would be most effective?

  • NO CHANGE

  • stay during

  • stay the night

  • staying at

Question 1c

Multiple choice

The warmth and hospitality of the people, as much as the stunning landscapes, {keeps} my spirits high during those long, solitary days of walking. Which choice best corrects the selection in brackets?

  • NO CHANGE

  • kept

  • are keeping

  • have kept

Question 1d

Multiple choice

It was a moment of pure peace, a reminder of {why I had set out on this journey at first place.} What is the most effective version of the selection in brackets?

  • NO CHANGE

  • why I set out on this journey in the first place

  • why I had set out on this journey in the first of all

  • why I set out for this journey at the first place

Question 2a

Multiple choice

The road stretched ahead in a straight, {unbroken lines,} the horizon a shimmering blur in the distance. Which choice best corrects the selection in brackets?

  • NO CHANGE

  • unbroken line,

  • unbroken, line

  • unbroken’s line,

Question 2b

Multiple choice

With nothing but the open road before me, my mind wandered freely, {untangling thoughts and memories which} had long been buried beneath the busyness of everyday life. What is the most effective way to revise the selection in brackets?

  • NO CHANGE

  • untangling thoughts and memories that

  • untangling those thoughts, and memories which

  • untangle thoughts and memories that

Question 2c

Multiple choice

In the context of the passage, which of the following sentences, if added to the end of paragraph [5], would best strengthen the idea of solitude?

  • At times, I longed for the company of others, but the silence was overwhelming.

  • Though I had met many kind locals, I spent much of my time alone on the road.

  • My feet ached from the walking, and I found myself missing the mountain air.

  • As I walked, I frequently thought of the next village and the people I might meet there.

Question 2d

Multiple choice

Which of the following sentences from the passage most effectively summarizes the narrator’s experience on the Meseta?

  • After the rugged beauty of the Sierra de Grazalema, the vast, flat plains of the Meseta were a stark contrast. (Paragraph [4])

  • The days on the Meseta tested my endurance, but they also brought unexpected moments of beauty. (Paragraph [7])

  • Walking through this landscape, I felt a profound sense of solitude. (Paragraph [5])

  • One afternoon, as I approached a small village, I noticed a group of elderly men gathered under a shady tree. (Paragraph [6])

Question 2e

Multiple choice

The writer is considering moving paragraph [7] to the beginning of the passage (after paragraph [3]). Would this be a good idea?

  • Yes, because it would give readers a better understanding of the narrator's emotional connection to the Meseta.

  • Yes, because it introduces the Meseta before describing its appearance.

  • No, because it would disrupt the chronological flow of the journey.

  • No, because paragraph [7] provides an important conclusion to the narrator’s reflections.

Question 2f

Multiple choice

Which choice most accurately describes the function of paragraph [2] in relation to the rest of Entry 1?

  • It introduces the narrator’s first experiences with locals on the journey.

  • It provides a detailed description of the landscapes of Andalusia.

  • It offers insight into the narrator’s emotional connection to the Sierra de Grazalema.

  • It foreshadows the challenges the narrator will face later in the journey.

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